Thursday, May 12, 2016

I am poem

I am…
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you


I am an Artist
I wonder if I will get a Basket Ball hoop if I keep practicing  
I hear chuckling from microscopic kids clowning around
I see my mother baking delicious dinner
I want to have a joyful life when I grow up
I am an Artist
I pretend that i'm a foal galloping
I feel solid drips of rain splattering all over me
I touch my miniature poodles silky fur
I worry nobody wants me around
I cry if people get irritated at me
I am an Artist
I understand if my cousin doesn't want me around  
I say to myself that I can do anything
I dream of flying puppies and kittens
I try to make everybody cheerful
I hope that everything will be amazing when I am older
I am an Artist
This is my I am poem that is all about me. 

I am proud of my 'I am poem' because of all of the things that are about me and because I put a whole lot of effort into it. I have been working on my 'I am poem' to put as much detail about me into it. Something that has challenged me is trying to realize what is all about me. I have been learning to do my best in everything and not rush. Next time I could change the vocab.





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